Author Topic: BDMC Shirt [UPDATED] (Final Version!) (Read 3588 times)

Agmundr · « **on:** May 24, 2011, 01:29:06 PM »

Hey guys
I had this project for school to pass this year, I had to design a shirt using adobe illustrator.
So I tried to make an awesome BDMC shirt. Please rate and comment if you want.

Constructive Criticism is always welcome

here ya go:
Final version (Click here for bigger view)

Updates:
Removed barcode. (Thanks all for your suggestions.)
Improved font spacing. (Thanks for suggestion Skinless.)

DeathWalkingTerror · « **Reply #1 on:** May 24, 2011, 05:39:14 PM »

Looks great bro. I would wear that!

If I may make a suggestion: I would put the web address on the back, under the word Brutality. Just my opinion

Other than that, fuckin' awesome job!

vit · « **Reply #2 on:** May 24, 2011, 10:56:51 PM »

the barcode looks f*cking great

... just joking

Very nice design ... 1 tip , I would keep the back as back and the front as front just with the url switching to the back side

==skinless== · « **Reply #3 on:** May 24, 2011, 11:00:04 PM »

Not bad at all mate,but i will say like vit ,the link should be in the back

Nice stuff anyway

RigorMortis · « **Reply #4 on:** May 25, 2011, 01:19:47 AM »

LOve it, I will jump in front of every bar code detector in the malls to re check the shirt's price

Agmundr · « **Reply #5 on:** May 25, 2011, 03:22:07 AM »

Okay will change the url to the back

and remove the barcode if desired.

Will do when in Project work hours

sylfreak · « **Reply #6 on:** May 25, 2011, 04:53:04 AM »

I like it, I agree the web address should be on the back. Can you know up a version where the word brutality is in the same font as "proud member etc", I m just not too sure the different font fits well.

Agmundr · « **Reply #7 on:** May 25, 2011, 05:42:10 AM »

Quote from: sylfreak on May 25, 2011, 04:53:04 AM

I like it, I agree the web address should be on the back. Can you know up a version where the word brutality is in the same font as "proud member etc", I m just not too sure the different font fits well.

Sure, should I remove the BDMC barcode as well?
I'll make two versions for now.

Agmundr · « **Reply #8 on:** May 25, 2011, 06:54:47 AM »

Here are the two versions

Version one (Click here for bigger view)

Version two (Click here for bigger view)

Here ya go will update first post too

RigorMortis · « **Reply #9 on:** May 25, 2011, 08:16:22 AM »

Version 2 is just fine, but I think if we would do some colors, the production price will increase.

Agmundr · « **Reply #10 on:** May 25, 2011, 08:59:57 AM »

Quote from: RigorMortis on May 25, 2011, 08:16:22 AM

Version 2 is just fine, but I think if we would do some colors, the production price will increase.

Yes very true that's why I only did black and white cause I've designed a shirt for my girlfriend using, Black, Grey, Pink and White and it came out to be very expensive to press :c

sylfreak · « **Reply #11 on:** May 25, 2011, 09:42:22 AM »

Both are great, but I much prefer the second, revised version. Im not fussed with the barcode, but I think the back looks much better in one font. Awesome work man.

Quote from: Agmundr on May 25, 2011, 06:54:47 AM