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[BRUTALDEATHFREAK01]

No offence, but it seems like you're just repeating the same lyrics over and over again in each song. lol

creates tension in each song.

builds up. if you listen to bands they do this all the time.

just a style of writing.

this band is quite like that its just an angry mob lol

my others are more story based and are very different than those.

for example on of my old ones. from like 2008 or 2009?

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Abused Inhalant

The Chapters of Pain and Disorder

1)   Deuteronomy
2)   Destroyed Neuropathy
3)   Arise The Depth of Aceruloplasminemia
4)   Granted Achondrogenesis
5)   The Nameless
6)   Discrete Neighbours
7)   Injected With Epidermolysis Bullosa
   Breeding Leukaemia
9)   Polyposis Utopia

1)   Deuteronomy

Murder of religions from present to past, unforgiving torment and forgiving sites. No reason left for these peoples on the plains of death. In the book of Jihad, they go. No one left except these Jewish traits. Untapped baby girls raped of their women hood. Discouraged to walk into the cruel, cruel world. Massive bigotry ceasing the breed alone. The fight goes on and war is too far gone, in the book of Deuteronomy.

The past so futile, ripping rib cages off bodies. So far tormented and painfully skinned alive that their bodies could not be identified. In the battle of hope and faith came murder and hatred. The towns were scattered with fear as the women were drenched with meuniere. The fast lightning strike by the enemy, who fingered their clitoris and bled them through with sticks and bludgeoned objects. The fight goes on and war is too far gone, in the book of Deuteronomy.

Regions have been discredited, renowned and reclaimed, as refugees have been masticated, eaten and abbreviated. No one left so pure anymore, but the Jewish fight on with the Arabs with bigger, powerful weapons than before. The settlement on the hilltop is gained with blood. As the fight is still on as the wife of the king was raped by sixty thousand men. Making her labia minora swell up and make her anus bleed with excrement. Aroused by thousands of diseased penis’s she lay their with contracted chronic failure of the lubrication of her own personal vagina. The fight goes on and war is too far gone, in the book of Deuteronomy.

2)   Destroyed Neuropathy

The hall of fame of neurotic diseases as her disorder inflates the sensory and cranial nerve system to dogmatic features. Her nerve interestingly peripheral polyneuropathy condition is verified as her feet and legs degrade away. The emotion of her suffering is all to way for the perpetrator as it is a human that injected this disorder into her. The rotten cells that have been munched by an evolved polyneuropathy, and destroyed Neuropathy.
The body of the victim is taken to a and e as quickly as can be. The ambulance arrives with five helpful hands to take her to her unknown death. Centered around to helping, giving her fluid and comfort. The help is all for nothing as each drop of fluid given to her makes her nerve system break down to a biometric mass. Her face becomes escalated with fear as her bones are now being shown and her skin dripping off like a crème la sole. Her body deflating with ion and haemoglobin escaping as she drifts in to caderatic arrest. The rotten cells that have been munched by an evolved polyneuropathy, and destroyed Neuropathy.


She died not so long ago and more cases have arisen. Too bad the victim didn’t know she passed it on to a million. The fleshless carcasses drift around from town to town eating the flesh of others trying to savoir there skin back again. Rejected, injected and beaten to death, the once helpful come hostile as the chronically disease comes closer and closer. The rotten cells that have been munched by an evolved polyneuropathy, and now only to have a destroyed Neuropathy.

3)   Arise The Depth of Aceruloplasminemia

Ceruloplasmin gene mutates there ant nothing more to do, but sit and wait for your untimely death. Intrigued by autosomal recessive metabolism in the human body is futile for any living thing. The Aceruloplasminemia contracted by a selfish family that has been erected and felled at the closing hurdle. The weak are trampled and the failure has arrived to Arise The Depth of Aceruloplasminemia.

Mandatory progressive neurodegeneration of the retina and basal ganglia insulate the victim and their ancestral relations. The screaming modified disease takes over the brain and liver, ceasing the very life man has to offer. As the family dies one after another. It is failed to see by a generation of snobbery and indifferent chronic behaviour. The society welcomes death at a young age for the hospitals can not afford any more causalities after the cut of public spending overwhelmed by political entity. The weak are trampled and the failure has arrived to Arise The Depth of Aceruloplasminemia.

The society welcomes death at a young age for the hospitals can not afford any more causalities after the cut of public spending overwhelmed by political entity. The weak are trampled and the failure has arrived to Arise The Depth of Aceruloplasminemia.

The moment has arrived to be killed by your first left and be dropped by the roadside as your state thrives with unpleasant disease and disorder. As hyperinflation cuts in deep in your liver, and the cells burst open leaving internal bleeding to finish you off. The brain is squashed in the bowels of your skull, only to one day to grow so big that it pops out of your socket or out of your mouth. Reason to believe that your bloated pancreas was because of the autosomal recessive disorder. 

As hyperinflation cuts in deep in your liver, and the cells burst open leaving internal bleeding to finish you off. Arise The Depth of Aceruloplasminemia.

4)   Granted Achondrogenesis


Abused, unused, abominated and excused. The granted dwarfism of the tissues, limbs and respiratory system is clear to be seen. As the bones and cartilage are malformed with high intent of abusing life it self. The subjects are too small to fit in normal life, so they are locked up in an incubator and left to die. Lack of malnutrition from the doctor that you pay to help your juvenile survive. Is left to die in a swallow of hate as the Granted Achondrogenesis makes the offspring to degrade and fade away.

Tortured, poked and pressured. The tools used today are irrelevant for the baby to survive anyways. Often prematurely given to life or stillborn it is hard to figure out why as the human technological advancement is too low for the force of nature impending doom onto humanity. Life is sucked out of the child as his limbs are seemed to be sucked into his sockets as only an inch can now be seen. The small head is overweight for the tiny body and cracks the spinal cord and the disorder kills them out right. The breaking of bones is not too often the cause of death as juvenile rates of surviving has gone up but only towards more pain and suffering. Some using euthanasia as a way out of their torment, selfish as they are to get on and have sexual intercourse with each other. No time for these deformed kids as they are left to die. In a swallow of hate as the Granted Achondrogenesis makes the offspring to degrade and fade away.

Lack of malnutrition from the doctor that you pay to help your juvenile survive. Is left to die in a swallow of hate as the Granted Achondrogenesis makes the offspring to degrade and fade away.

Inherent problems to not sway the parents to give their baby a chance, yet they selfishly discard their son or daughter into the dungeon of Achondrogenesis suffering. Together as one, the disorder will never die and the gene of malformation will still be here until humanity all painfully commits their bones to their graves. In a swallow of hate as the Granted Achondrogenesis makes the offspring to degrade and fade away.

Together as one, the disorder will never die and the gene of malformation will still be here until humanity all painfully commits their bones to their graves

5)   The Nameless

The ectopic endometrial tissue just around her lovely sexual features comes to pain that no man will endure. The swelling of the endometrial within the myometrium layer starts to recreate a disorder called Adenomyosis. The once a month cycle is the cause of the pain, that makes mothers bleed from anus to clitoris, lurva to minora. The believed penetration of a male is often painful during a pleasurable experience usual to humankind.  However, this is taken further by the existence of one hated human who feasts on these women.

Lining the uterus as it comes heavy and draftee the killer is certified by lust and has to rape the pure mother to pieces. The bleeding penetrates right through the myometrium layer which increases pain and disorder to her and leaves his erection filled with cum and excrement waste. Taken over by the engulfing pleasure, the killer begins to eat her inner lining of the endometrial tissue, going up the body inch by inch and sawing off her face and eating her eyeballs. Taken to an outhouse on parkway she is left to rot and be decomposed. Dumped, forgotten but not entirely dead, she waits for a passabys to pick up their phone to call for help. Fourteen days later as her body is dried and her mouth wide open as she screamed for hours before she died, her saviour came and the police found a mass murder on their hands.

The Nameless are shown the door into the depth of hell as the lining of their uterus is overwhelmed by Adenomyosis. Their life untrusted and believed to be infecting the male race is too unfavourable for the killer.

The Nameless are shown the door into the depth of hell as the lining of their uterus is overwhelmed by Adenomyosis. Their life untrusted and believed to be infecting the male race is too unfavourable for the killer.

6)   Discrete Neighbours

Asymptomatic diseases caused by a menstrual infected disease to come alight with no symptoms except pain and discomfort. The women is homebound and thus dependant on delivery boys to come round and help her into bed at night or to take her self to the loo. The trust she needs to stay alive lies in the hands of the public and this is where her life ends. The Discrete Neighbours of her adjacent endometrial and myometrium layers as this diseases stews in her uterus the endometrial tissue implants it self within the myometrium layer. This procreates abnormal muscular growth leading to abnormalities. The men decided to infatuate this and increase the pain by injecting her with a combating disease that makes the layer tighten. As it grows in side her, like a ticking time bomb, the uterus is swollen so far that her piss in left inside and has to be cut out by a scalpel. Marking her beautiful thighs and layering vagina, so far that it is disfigured and useless for any reclamation.

7)   Injected With Epidermolysis Bullosa


Freaks are gathered around to be injected with EB. The skin they take for granted will full off one cell after another. As the blood clotting arteries are freed of their misused bodies. Sown into a society of sex, hatred and forgiveness, leaves no choice to kill and dismember. Injected with Epidermolysis Bullosa is the only way out for the ones that have nothing left to consider.

The causation of mutation in the keratin gene makes the scientific analysis of the killer all the more endurable. In the world so bled and taken out, in the world so painless and free, in the world so cruel and surrender comes a tornado of diseased, uncared for pile of rotten bones. Injected with Epidermolysis Bullosa is the only way out for the ones that have nothing left to consider.

Children have gone missing due to the governments hypnotised notion of scientific progression. Begs the question, untimely on the lips of the failed. Why is it that we are all discouraged today? After the war is lost, the battle still drives on as the failed are losing their very skin that put them to being. Injected with Epidermolysis Bullosa is the only way out for the ones that have nothing left to consider.

Epidermis falls right off leaving the dermis cells to disfigure and malnutriuate across the body fluids. The patient is set into long years of wasting away. As the experiment is carried on, the patients act on rage to get out of their concrete cradles of death. Injected with Epidermolysis Bullosa is the only way out for the ones that have nothing left to consider.

   Breeding Leukaemia

In the laboratory far away, the mad scientists get to work on infecting all the criminals of the society. To mould them into bald hungry creatures, bloodthirsty for flesh. The Breeding Leukaemia taking place in laboratories making disfigured creatures fit for the new humanity.

Blood is taken into the skin and the once human men and women go through a cycle of death and rage to live on as hungry mammals looking for food to feast on. The overall plan to eradicate existence of men, and to leave humanity shaking its fist at a new brave world. The Breeding Leukaemia taking place in laboratories making disfigured creatures fit for the new humanity.

9)   Polyposis Utopia

The city that was based on lies comes to a stand still as the disease sets in. Millions of years past from generation to generation. Leaving immaculate habitats for the disease in question. No one is left without it today, as the infected city becomes county, continent and then world. Laryngeal papillomatosis fests away at an early age, with polyps in their throat lining going down through to the intestine rectum area. Leaving its dirty trial of blood and excrement, excitingly waiting to reach out and kill you!

Nothing in this world left living for, as the disease has taken over. The streets are laden with the embryos of new tormented polyps for the Polyposis Utopia.

Rewritten word of God, says that man will live through a plague or two. This is not true, they say and atheists breed alongside death at the wings of pain. Nothing in the start of its life, but breeding its bacteria viral state it passes through and creates a living thing. Eating, pestering, weaving inside of you, never going to flush through until it busts out of your rectum and mouth causing your insides to bleed out. Papillomatosis builds up inside, and waits for its haemorrhaging pattern of waste, eating through skin and bone to eventually rid you of one true blessed life. Masticating memories producing gastrointestinal diseases to.

Nothing in this world left living for, as the disease has taken over. The streets are laden with the embryos of new tormented polyps for the Polyposis Utopia.

[FoulPhil]

That is a wall of text. Well I'm not saying there are rules to anything. No one said you couldn't repeat the same things over and over again lol.

[BRUTALDEATHFREAK01]

That is a wall of text.

yes, lyrics in another style of writing.

Well I'm not saying there are rules to anything. No one said you couldn't repeat the same things over and over again lol.

I know i just like proving people wrong

Also that one is quite scientific and very hard to write. Thats why that band only made that demo/ep, too hard for me to research and write that shit lol.

another method is short and to the point lyrics.

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Bandname: Stabbing Her Through The Eyeballs

Docname: Lyrics #1

Lyric Dump:

Overview

1.   Mass Slaughter
2.   Killing With Ease
3.   Scalpel To The Face
4.   Bleeding from the Anus
5.   Sexual Stimulation
6.   The Beast Within
7.   Your God No More
8.   Stench of Gore
9.   Rhythm To The Tune of Suffering
   



1)   Mass Slaughter

Damage to the skull
Bounded and severed in a hole
Never to be seen again, in this life
Broken and ripped from heart to metatarsal.

Another comes into the pit
Smothered and draped in shit
Then castrated by an axe
Bit by bit the man wastes away.

Here we are, mass slaughter
In the depths of hell, post-killer
Hidden away, no one can hear
Beaten astray, your life ends here!

Again, the time…five more come
Hit with a warhammer, slit at the throat
Not once, oh no…but three
To get them out of the picture of thought.

Here we are, mass slaughter
In the depths of hell, post-killer
Hidden away, no one can hear
Beaten astray, your life ends here!


2. Killing With Ease

The name is known across worldwide
Like a fucking title that you can’t deny
Freaking bastard and an asshole
Whose pleasure is to fucking post-apocopate your eye!

The killing has began
One gets it right through the tongue
Another on a horse, raped by a drill and driven off course
Falls into a tree, her nose screws up like a banshee.

No course for denial
If you’re walking alone
You are the dead one to him
Never to see daylight ever again!

The name is known across worldwide
Like a fucking title that you can’t deny
Freaking bastard and an asshole
Whose pleasure is to fucking post-apocopate your eye!

The edge of his blade covered in blood
With each hack, gives way an arm
Another to the head brutally severed. Severed.
Like a nightmare in your bedroom…

Killing with ease…
In his own head he pleases
The masticate pleasure
Of his underrating horror
He must be stopped but can he be?

The edge of his blade covered in blood
With each hack, gives way an arm
Another to the head brutally severed. Severed.
Like a nightmare in your bedroom…

3.Scalpel To The Face

Getting closer, by step by step
Running to encounter your fucking chick!
Never again, she breathes
Never again, she leaves!

Scalpel to the face
Excrement her beauty
For everything she has, is now mine!

Get a hold of her
Lash a punch in her nose
Bleeds like a bastard on payroll
Now I got her in a headlock
Going to stab her with my scalpel
Scraping and engaging, the sweat starts returning
Never again, she breathes
Never again, she leaves!

4. Bleeding From The Anus

Lying on the floor
Chained to a wall
In a little hole
In the basement where I keep my jewels.

Nothing more than a degenerate creature
She feeds out of a bowl fall of maggots
Eating her rotting corpse too
As she suffers I wait with my screw.

As she is maturing with death lingering
I come with my screw and shove it up her arse
She squeals in pain and the blood pours in vain
She is now on the floor covered in cum, blood and gore!

Bleeding from the anus,
Ready to be incinerated
Now deformed up the butt
It’s ready for her nice scrumptious cunt.

Lovely stones are shoved up her vaginal canal
As they go up and sting her beautiful wall
It bleeds intently, waiting for execution as she screams immensely
She is so beautiful; I may just paint myself in her entrails!

Now, she’s screaming to make me stop
The shock makes her drop after this outburst
After, her conscious is not enough
I wake her up with a splash
The cum I conjured in the excitement of her blood
She wakes and tries to reach for a weapon
As her life and chains are now breaking!

5.   Sexual Stimulation

Paedophile
That’s what they call me
When I shove my dick up a little girls arse.

Sexual stimulation
No more no less
Fucking this 5 year old
Making me survive

I hook my penis into her vagina
Not fully formed
It bleeds from the inside
Making her scream

I know she likes it
I can tell
From her eyeballs
Are dropping out

Now another, in the picture
She does what she is told
When I release my hold
She dances in the film
I just have to jerk off to it
It’s satisfying enough for an exciting minute or two…

However, this is not enough
I want more for the stimulation is progressing
Astoria in my heart
I want her, I fancy her
I want her, in my bed
Fucking her in the arse

I finger her; she knows what its like
Before puberty hits her sweet little body
I will take her now
On the ride to hell
Sexual stimulation
No more no less
Fucking this 5 year old
Making me survive
Paedophile
That’s what they call me
When I shove my dick up a little girls arse.

6.   Pipe through the Cunt

Standing above you with my might
Making the rope around the pipe so tight
Increasing the tension ever so slightly
The pipe going in nightly.

Pipe through the cunt
Rammed up the front
Enough bitching you slut
You are now getting in the butt.

Massive exaltation as she screams blood
My life has gone worthy as she is nearly dead
A life form killed, makes me so pleasured
To infiltrate such a lovely specimen is valued.

As she slowly bleeds through
Her intestines begin to spew
Forward to the next
As I severe this ones breast!

The pipe gets pulled out
As my boner begins to ejaculate
All over the place
As I make it for the exit.

Clenching my pipe with both my hands
Dripping from guts and spewed anal brains
I see the next, tied to the bench
I cover her in soot and bleach her with implement
The pipe again is tied as tightly as possible
To a bit of rope upon a hanging screw
She now screams fear, telling me to stop
I push it in so hard,
The pipe pushes right outside her backside!

Pipe through the cunt
Rammed up the front
Enough bitching you slut
You are now getting in the butt.
Pipe through the cunt
Rammed up the front
Enough bitching you slut
You are now getting in the butt.

6) The Beast Within

Leading a normal life
Never enough for your type
Trying to always better yourself
In this traitorous world.

You cannot take it anymore
You’re trying to get help for your addiction
You’re afraid but you cannot scare
You’re fucking yourself to death.

Release, is your only weapon
Going to a school full of young girls
Release, your only satisfaction
Raping those poor innocent beings.

You carve her chest open with glee
You saturate her vagina with your salvia
Telling yourself ‘it cannot be’
The force that is the beast within ya.


7) Your God No More

Standing alone at the alter
You pray to your stupid God
Waiting for a disorder
From the one up above

I turn your slaves, into somebody’s
I turn your rest, into fucking work
I make your life so miserable
Your God, No more

Sweat turns to blood
As I put the cross into your backside
Up the arse it goes
Paining your sweet saviour delight

I hate your notions
I hate these times
I hate the people who follow the preachers
Nothing anymore matters
Your God no more

Walking past a church
The spike falls into your chest
Stabs right through the ribs
Spurts shit all over us!

I see your pain
I see your fear
I see your everlasting stubbornness
Your God No More!

8. Stench of Gore

In the cell of unworthy
Your pitiful life will get even more dirty
Working for pennies on the street
Now you be here with me
Getting stretched for free!
The stench of gore, is too much for you
I love when the nail goes in
That crackling of bone
Those painful screams that own
Matter of life and death
You will be burnt, then shat on and then skinned alive!
Stench of this gore will be no more
When I am done with you
Your guts will spew the floor
Second I do to you
I gut out your ribs, put them to one side
I drain out your organs in a bathtub
Still alive and breathing
But now you’re fucking bleeding
This stench of gore, comes into my nostrils
Fills my day, when I stretch you out again
Till your bone shreds to pieces.

9.   Rhythm to the Tune of Suffering

Tune my radio as I drag your body
Through the woods the tune of suffering comes
Nightly, enchanted by the winds oppressed
Your breast is smashed against my chest

Rhythm to the tune of suffering
Making you bleed out of your vagina
Rhythm to my delight
More pain is right.

I stab into your chest
Meat for me to digest
Creasing over your thin body
Carving out the best to eat so heartily

Listening to the radio as I do
Beating the knife into you
As the beats drives on
Stab, stab, stab
You’re now dead

Beaten, raped, naked and stabbed
Hung out to dry
On a hook on a tree
Rotting for evermore!


Album: The Denouncement (09)
Overview

1) The Awaiting Torment
2) Chronic Psychosis
3) Murdering the Population
4) Seek Out and Rape
5) Child Deprivation
6) Rotting in the Basement
7) Uncontrollable Urge
Convicted
9) Another Cut Away
10) Halls of Pain: The Denouncement


1)   The Awaiting Torment

A new found weapon, used on young kids of today. The expertise of this man cannot be questioned, only to a jury.
The violent sucking of the biological machine that wounds her fragile body.
Too young for her walls to withstand the vacuum of this atrocity
Looking at herself she sees nothing left, lokking down below her vagina is a bloody mess.

Severing off her head, yet to be gifted intelligent ways, increased anger as he screws the head off. Getting hard is all he does, to severed body parts of young innocent girls. The past is behind him but he is still in the darkness. Too nice outside in society to be kept away from the school gates!

Unbound temptation feels his empty soul, as he prepares to slaughter another innocent girl.
Too late for this sixe year old, as she turns and trusts him to be with her.
No matter what she tries, the gasps of help are not heard in this light.
Struggling for air as she is strangled by a bag, getting his cock to masturbate over her.
Cumshot demon upon her face, as her last few breathes begin to take.
Her last words through a muffled bag screamed for help as her vagina for sacrificed.

Unbound temptation feels his empty soul, Unbound temptation feels his empty soul, Unbound temptation feels his empty soul, Unbound temptation feels his empty soul

2)   Chronic Psychosis

Method of operation fills his routine as he cuts away her soft hands and legs.
Awaiting the moment to stick hs fresh hard cock up her arse.
Forgetting that his fantasy can never be fulfilled, he goes from strength to strength making adjustments to his life.
Method of execution, as her head is severed and her eyes plucked out.
Gorging with fury the fire burns her body.
Decomposing at the end as he digs her grave.
Method of operation as police try to figure.
Late arrivals as Jennifer, Hannah and Casey all die one after each other.
Chronic Psychosis
Into the

[FoulPhil]

It's not proved wrong. It's a style of writing that says the same thing over and over again. Doesn't change the fact it's the same shit being said over and over again hahaha.

[FoulPhil]

Post some links to the music if you can. I would like to hear your music, bro.

[Spiritdisease]

Ugh...lyrics...I hate and love them at the same time 

I find it veeery hard to write lyrics for my projects, I often recycle bits from other lyrics of songs that I prolly wont ever put out.

[Virulo]

Yeah it's hard to try to connect with people with your own lyrics when they're kinda personal.

[BRUTALDEATHFREAK01]

Yeah it's hard to try to connect with people with your own lyrics when they're kinda personal.

I don't think that is necessarily true. You just have to say the lyrics in a simile or a phrase that in underlining to your personal issue/battle.

Like it Deathstars and their lyrics to Babylon

"Say what you want me to do
And I will do it for you"

So he will or you will do anything for the person that has asked of you, at first this what you think it means.

"Say who you want me to do
And I'll do her too"

Now this could be meant in a innocent way or a dark way. I always imagine it's a kind of relationship like that of Darth Vader and the lord skith from star wars, it's a kind of sinister rule book, and the lord is telling vader to do 'her' which i would think rape or something and i would think 'her' would be underage. so this verse is basically 'child abuse'.

The next bit proves my theory.

"And in the backstreets
All the demons
Laugh as hell -"

Now if you hear the song it is very sinister coming across and a dark feeling comes over you whilst listening.
Making it seem like the demons are telling 'him' to do the things he 'did' previously in that other verse.


"They want some more.
Dobermans raising Cain
In this lovely game --
And you wait to score"

Now i don't know what the first two lines mean but the 'lovely' - "game" and all you want to do is just 'score'. This to me, means that its some sort of underage prostitute ring or underage modelling trafficing process like you have in the Ukraine or Estonia. (also that film with Steven Segal where by he writes to a young girl who lives in an authonage and she gets sent on a 'modelling' course by these guys that traffic them to a warehouse where by they are made to do sexual acts on customers.)

The next and following bits as i don't want to delve so closely into this topic as of now confirm this theory further.

"They come in lines
To welcome you
They're shining through...
... Babylon
And the sights
Will pierce your eyes
Babylon
When nightmares
On both sides
Babylon
Watch how I strangle this
It is the infamous kiss
Watch when I lick your fists
I'll give 'em endless bliss
And the baby avatars
Invites me
With their nymphlike lips
Blackish uniformed shaped
On stolen tapes
Private hardcore flicks
They come in lines to welcome you
They're shining through...
... Babylon
And the sights
Will pierce your eyes
Babylon
When nightmares
On both sides
Babylon
Hold these hounds now
I want you to see
The thousand ways
That lead to terror
Hold these hounds now
I want you to feel
The endless grounds
That are from horror
They come in lines
To welcome you
They're shining through...
The human nakedness rides-
On the back of hell
The virgins sex up their lives-
And I wish you well"

heres the song

[toaddy]

arghhh wall of text. I need to get writing for my limbless abominations solo thing, but atm im doing lyrics for my shitty metalcore band

[BRUTALDEATHFREAK01]

arghhh wall of text. I need to get writing for my limbless abominations solo thing, but atm im doing lyrics for my shitty metalcore band

anaylsis is what its called.

[Spiritdisease]

The lyrics to the new song I posted in the "signed and unsigned metal bands" section under the "Disembodied" name:

Eating the flesh of my new victims
Drenched in blood as I like it most
screams sounding from my basement
my hands all covered in blood
no escape from this carnage
as I rip their insides out

I will stalk all you love
I will take the life from them

killing again,
I feel lethal
as I maim
another victim

I will slit their throat
I will slash their veins open

kill for vengeance

killing again,
I feel lethal
visions of carnage
slaughtering of man
screams echo in vain

this is my vengeance elite
this is my vengeance supreme

visions of carnage
slaughtering of man
screams echo in vain
torture beyond words

[Bartman]

There are some real talents here among us!!!
My English is way to bad for writing lyrics.....plus i don't have the talent to write some!!
 

In  brutal death metal , the lyrics are (imo) needles, it's all about the music!! (and headbanging!! ^)

[Spiritdisease]

There are some real talents here among us!!!
My English is way to bad for writing lyrics.....plus i don't have the talent to write some!!
 

In  brutal death metal , the lyrics are (imo) needles, it's all about the music!! (and headbanging!! ^)

It depends, bdm like Disgorge, Devourment, etc doesnt need great lyrics but I do appreciate some deathmetal with actually understandable and decent lyrics once in a while 

[RigorMortis]

I like lyrics, but I love poems more, here's one :

Stephen Crane - A man saw a ball of gold in the sky

A man saw a ball of gold in the sky;
He climbed for it,
And eventually he achieved it --
It was clay.

Now this is the strange part:
When the man went to the earth
And looked again,
Lo, there was the ball of gold.
Now this is the strange part:
It was a ball of gold.
Aye, by the heavens, it was a ball of gold.

[BRUTALDEATHFREAK01]

There are some real talents here among us!!!
My English is way to bad for writing lyrics.....plus i don't have the talent to write some!!
 

In  brutal death metal , the lyrics are (imo) needles, it's all about the music!! (and headbanging!! ^)

Depends what type

Lyrics can make or break a band in certian circumstances

also i love concept albums and stories written in the album booklet. Thats why i nearly always buy concept albums, whether it be death metal or blues or jazz, or even, dare i say i have, pop.

The best one i bought was a melodic death metal band that did three albums that were part of a story the vocalist wrote. I loved it and also bought the book. Interesting stuff and i did this with my band too. on a story which i have written since i was 10 years old. its on its 15th part now and getting really exciting. I do not know what the universe in my story will bring next. I might be tempted to type it up some day here and show all my creative work. as i am quite creative and i would love new ideas for the project to.

[VicerExciser206]

Ok this is for all the wannabe singers and lyricists out there. Post some lyrics that you have written. If your lyrics are long please put them in a spoiler.

I'll start

Pig Fucking Slut

I discover a most insideous crime
a pig fucking slut fucking all the time
as i chase her she slips on the semen
of the dirty hog she was bangin'

when i catch her i stab the bitch
and then i get the itch
to rape her like the filthy a animal

I killed a pig fucking whore
in front of the coner store
then i raped a pig fucking bitch
in the filthy ditch.

I get up and watch her naked body bleed
how could a common whore and dirty pig breed
something truely discusting
i hear the swine howling

I through her dead body to the pigs that she fucked
and upon her flesh they sucked
the blood of the pig fucking slut.

I killed a pig fucking whore
in front of the coner store
then i raped a pig fucking bitch
in the filthy ditch.

Not that bad aye?

Awesome 

[Zombie]

Yeah I would say I had a stroke of genius with that one.

[BabyShaker]

Raping Rat Rectum

There once was a man who owned a basement, full of blood and gore misplacement! Bodies on hooks, heads in nooks, and cannibal manudo is what he cooks! One fine day, a rat came in and committed the biggest of the sins. He shoved a severed finger up his ass and turned on all the toxic gas. He crawled in the eyes and mad...e iced tea and mixed it with his fuck pee. He chewed his was through the fucking cocks and rammed his way through an electric box. The fucking bitch clawed the pussys, too, and slithered his way into the stew. He drank it all with a rotten skull and puked out someone's testicle. He died that day with his dick in his mane. Raping Rat Rectum was his name. His soul's in hell to this very day, fucking Marilyn Monroe's fine puss-ay!

[BabyShaker]

PANCREAS PORNO!!!!!
STICK YOUR DICK IN AND MAKE YOURSELF SICKEN!
 FUCK THAT PANCREAS LIKE IT WAS A CHICKEN!
AND WHEN YOU CUM MAKE SURE YOUR ALL DONE SO YOU CAN PICK IT UP WITH YOUR SISTER'S TONGUE!
 PANCREAS PORNO!!!
FUCK THE HOLE YOU TORN-O!
PLACE YOUR COCK IN A WOOLEN SOCK AND FUCK THAT ORGAN UNTIL IT STOCKS!
 BLOOD IS LUBRICATION TO MY MASTURBATION BEFORE I STICK MY GIANT COCK IN YOUR FORNICATION!
YOUR HEART IS MY NEXT BITCH!
CUT THE HEART WITH A RUSTY KNIFE AND FILL IT UP WITH MY WHITENED STRIFE WHILE YOUR CRIMSON ARTERIES SHOOT OUT SHIT, LIKE MY DEAD FRIENDS WIFE IN A FIRE PIT!
YOU SCREAM THROUGH YOUR BLOOD IN A GARGLED MESS, WITH MY THROBBING COCK IS IN YOUR CHEST! PANCREAS PORNO WAS THE FIRST, THIS IS THE SEQUEL, BUT NOT THE WORST! SNAPPING YOUR NECK WITH A STAINLESS STEEL CHAIN WHILE MY MUTHAFUCKING DICK MOVES TO YOUR BRAIN!

[VicerExciser206]

Raping Rat Rectum

There once was a man who owned a basement, full of blood and gore misplacement! Bodies on hooks, heads in nooks, and cannibal manudo is what he cooks! One fine day, a rat came in and committed the biggest of the sins. He shoved a severed finger up his ass and turned on all the toxic gas. He crawled in the eyes and mad...e iced tea and mixed it with his fuck pee. He chewed his was through the fucking cocks and rammed his way through an electric box. The fucking bitch clawed the pussys, too, and slithered his way into the stew. He drank it all with a rotten skull and puked out someone's testicle. He died that day with his dick in his mane. Raping Rat Rectum was his name. His soul's in hell to this very day, fucking Marilyn Monroe's fine puss-ay!